No by Iain Rowan

“Give me your money.”

“No.”

“What do you mean, no? Give me your fucking money. Do it, do it.”

“No.”

“I’ll cut you.”

“No.”

“I will, I’ll fucking cut you. Just hand over the money.”

“No.”

“You’re fucking crazy, I’ll do you, I will. Give me it, last chance,
I’ll cut you.”

“No.”

“You asked for this, you’re going to get it.”

# # #

“Jesusfuckingchrist, no. Stop.”

“No.”

“Please stop, I won’t oh Jesus I won’t do it oh shit shit shit I won’t
do it again I needed the money, I needed oh Jesus Jesus please stop
doing it I’m sorry I’m sorry…I can’t, I can’t breathe. Stop.”

“No.”

“I won’t. Again. Swear. Please. Please. Breathe.”

“No.”

“Stop.”

“No.”

“Pl-”

“No.”

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7 responses to “No by Iain Rowan

  1. Yes, more, yes, more, yes, more.

    Great fun in this piece.

  2. Bartleby The Scribner meet Crime Fiction.

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    Judgments?

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